Jesse Juarez
Ms. Lehmann
English 2-2A
4 October 2019
When I got my pool
It was a normal warm morning when we woke up from a sleep. I woke up and ate plate of noodles and when I was done I went to go brush my teeth and I went off to go cut some yards after I was done with the first yard I went off to go cut the second yard. when I got done cutting it I went home. When I got home my dad was just getting home from work and he told me if I was done cutting the two yards and I told him that I was done cutting them. I went to my room and turned on the air because it was so hot outside and after like two hours later told my dad and mom if they can buy us pool so we won’t have to ask them if they can take us to the lake or anything.
My mom told my dad that it was not a bad idea about the pool. My dad told my mom that how much was the pool in Costco and my mom told my dad like at least 500 dollars for the pool the kids want and he was like that to much for a pool I told him I would put 200 dollars for the pool and he was like ok. Me and my mom got ready to headed to twin falls so we can go buy the pool that me and my sisters wanted like 30 mins later we got to Costco and headed to the back the back of the store and got a loader so we can load the pool in the cart and when me and my mom load the pool we had to get some stuff for the pool. I told my mom if we can get some pool toys for the pool and she let me grab pool noodles after we got all the stuff for the pool we went to the counter so we can get check out and leave after we got done paying after all we ended up paying 600 and something.
My mom told me to wait by the door while she gets the pickup next to the Costco door so we can load up the pool. When she got to the front of the store she told me to ask for help because the box of the pool was to heavy for both of us. When I went to go ask for help they told that what did I need help on and I told them that I needed help loading a pool in back of the pick up and they said ok. When we done loading the pool in back of the pickup we went to Home Depot to go and buy some sand for the pool filter after I got the sand I went to the front of the store go to and pay for the sand and it was like five dollars. When I got done paying I grabbed the bag and head towards the pickup. When I got inside the truck we drove back home. When we got home we took the pickup to the back yard and unloaded the pool there and after we got the pool of the truck we opened the pool box and took everything out of the box and started building the pool.
My parents and I didn’t know how to set the pool so we had to search it up on youtube like ten minutes into watching the video we started setting it up in my back yard and like 15teen minutes later we got done setting it. The pool was going to take Two full days to fell it up the to line. The next morning me and my sisters went to twin falls to go buy more floats and toys that sink to the bottom of the pool. When the pool was all felled up we called my uncle that is like 11 or 12 years old if he wanted to get in the pool with us and he said yes so we waited for him to come so we can all get in the pool together. While he came to our house me and my sisters when outside to go fell how cold the water was and it was freezing could ten minutes later he got to my house and we went outside to get in the pool and I was the last one to get in because the water was cold.
Personal Narrative Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
1. Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific.
First I had to write a outline and when I was done with everything I started typing everything.
2. What qualifies this paper as a narrative? What are the requirements for this genre and how did you meet them?
I used dialogue and description to tell my story.
3. What is one part of your story that you think turned out really well? What do you like about that part?
One part of the story that was when I had to set up the pool with my parents and sisters.
Ms. Lehmann
English 2-2A
4 October 2019
When I got my pool
It was a normal warm morning when we woke up from a sleep. I woke up and ate plate of noodles and when I was done I went to go brush my teeth and I went off to go cut some yards after I was done with the first yard I went off to go cut the second yard. when I got done cutting it I went home. When I got home my dad was just getting home from work and he told me if I was done cutting the two yards and I told him that I was done cutting them. I went to my room and turned on the air because it was so hot outside and after like two hours later told my dad and mom if they can buy us pool so we won’t have to ask them if they can take us to the lake or anything.
My mom told my dad that it was not a bad idea about the pool. My dad told my mom that how much was the pool in Costco and my mom told my dad like at least 500 dollars for the pool the kids want and he was like that to much for a pool I told him I would put 200 dollars for the pool and he was like ok. Me and my mom got ready to headed to twin falls so we can go buy the pool that me and my sisters wanted like 30 mins later we got to Costco and headed to the back the back of the store and got a loader so we can load the pool in the cart and when me and my mom load the pool we had to get some stuff for the pool. I told my mom if we can get some pool toys for the pool and she let me grab pool noodles after we got all the stuff for the pool we went to the counter so we can get check out and leave after we got done paying after all we ended up paying 600 and something.
My mom told me to wait by the door while she gets the pickup next to the Costco door so we can load up the pool. When she got to the front of the store she told me to ask for help because the box of the pool was to heavy for both of us. When I went to go ask for help they told that what did I need help on and I told them that I needed help loading a pool in back of the pick up and they said ok. When we done loading the pool in back of the pickup we went to Home Depot to go and buy some sand for the pool filter after I got the sand I went to the front of the store go to and pay for the sand and it was like five dollars. When I got done paying I grabbed the bag and head towards the pickup. When I got inside the truck we drove back home. When we got home we took the pickup to the back yard and unloaded the pool there and after we got the pool of the truck we opened the pool box and took everything out of the box and started building the pool.
My parents and I didn’t know how to set the pool so we had to search it up on youtube like ten minutes into watching the video we started setting it up in my back yard and like 15teen minutes later we got done setting it. The pool was going to take Two full days to fell it up the to line. The next morning me and my sisters went to twin falls to go buy more floats and toys that sink to the bottom of the pool. When the pool was all felled up we called my uncle that is like 11 or 12 years old if he wanted to get in the pool with us and he said yes so we waited for him to come so we can all get in the pool together. While he came to our house me and my sisters when outside to go fell how cold the water was and it was freezing could ten minutes later he got to my house and we went outside to get in the pool and I was the last one to get in because the water was cold.
Personal Narrative Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
1. Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific.
First I had to write a outline and when I was done with everything I started typing everything.
2. What qualifies this paper as a narrative? What are the requirements for this genre and how did you meet them?
I used dialogue and description to tell my story.
3. What is one part of your story that you think turned out really well? What do you like about that part?
One part of the story that was when I had to set up the pool with my parents and sisters.